Sunday, February 21, 2010

The Way I See It


Naguib Mahfouz’s Palace Walk allows us, as readers, to delve into the minds of each and every character rather than only providing us with the opinions of one. By writing the novel in third person, Mahfouz is able to give us snippets of how each character feels and the way they view a certain situation or conflict that is presented in the novel. This allows us to see the effects that it has on each of the characters and how this, in turn, defines them as a person. The novel becomes the way they see it rather than the way one character sees it. This is what makes every character in the novel essential: the fact that they all have a say, even if they are not allowed to speak it aloud.

At the beginning of the novel, we are given a look into Amina’s daily routine. She appears to be a submissive wife whose views are suppressed, and as we are Westerners, we would assume that she is unhappy. We also assume that her husband, al-Sayyid Ahmad, is the leading cause of Amina’s unhappiness. However, when Mahfouz allows us the pleasure of viewing Amina’s thoughts on the matter, we see that Amina is very happy and feels very fortunate to have Ahmad as a husband. We also come to realize how much of an impact Ahmad has on his children. In this case, it is the women who hold him in high esteem.

The mother and her two girls went at once to the balcony. They stood at the window overlooking al-Nahhasin street to observe through the holes of its wodden grille the men of the family on the street. The father could be seen moving in a slow and dignified fashion. He projected an aura of grandeur and good looks, raising his hands in greeting from time to time. Uncle Hasanayn, the barber, Hajj Darwish, who sold beans, al-Fuli, the milkman, and al-Bayumi, the drinks vendor, all rose to greet him. The women watched him with eyes filled with love and pride... This moment was one of the happiest of the mother’s day (23).

In this passage, it is obvious that the women are proud to have such a well respected head of the house. His rough demeanor must be attributed to his willingness to gain respect in the household and amongst his peers. That does not mean, however that he is an uncaring man.
Although his family both fears and respects him, we are able to see a side of Ahmad that his family never sees because he keeps up a façade at home, but when in public, for some reason he is able to be himself.

The truth was that he was dreaded and feared only in his own family. With everyone else—friends, acquaintances, and customers—he was a different person. He received his share of respect and esteem but above all else was loved. He was loved for the charm of his personality more than for any of his many other fine characteristics. His acquaintances did not know what he was like at home. The members of his family did not know him as others did (36).

Because Mahfouz gives us the different perspectives of each character, we are able to see a character for who they really are. Our initial, hateful thoughts toward Ahmad can now be replaced with a sense of understanding. He has to be harsh at home in order to gain respect within the family. Getting his family to respect his is all he’s ever known; it was the way he was raised. This does not mean that he is incapable of loving them, he just happens to show it in a different way.

Seeing the way each character views a situation enlightens a reader. We are able to see the truth instead of just getting one character’s view. If Mahfouz had not written the novel in third person, we would never know who Ahmad was outside of the house. We would only see the way Amina and the children viewed him. By writing the novel in third person, we are able to sympathize with and understand Ahmad better. It is a way for him to get his say.

Work Cited

Mahfouz, Naguib. Palace Walk. Toronto: First American Edition, 1991. Print.

3 comments:

  1. Wow, Kersia! You brought my attention to something that I had not previously noticed and therefore didn't consider a valuable characteristic of the novel. The fact that you brought this up makes me compare this book to the Artist of a Floating World book. I noticed how in the other book everything was in the perspective of Ono and somewhat Noriko's, but here we get nearly everyone's perspective. I think that you introduce a very valuable point especially when it comes to understanding the characters and the issues in and surrounding the characters in the book. Ahmad is a very confusing character and being able to "understand" him by seeing him through the eyes of the other characters and even himself, I feel I do have a better grasp on the kind of person he is and what he values. I really wish I could tae this further, but I feel you've hit the nail on the head.

    Though, one thing that I can mention is why this is? Why does the author choose to give us so many different perspectives? Does he want us to choose sides or does he want us to just get the full understanding of the characters and issue? The point you bring up is very interesting and can definitely be pursued in deep thought and research of the book and the author. Good Job! You made me think! :)

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  2. You are both raising good questions here! Keep pursuing these ideas. In particular, you might think about how we view things from inside the household vs. outside the household. Is there anyone whose perspective is missing?

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  3. Kersia, I completely agree with the point that you're trying to make. As I was reading, I too thought about this. I kept thinking about how clever Mahfouz was being when writing the book and showing us everything he did. It was as if he was telling the story through the eyes of a higher being, one who sees all, God possibly. I think this is an effective way of writing simply because I like knowing EVERYTHING when I do something or read something. If I don't know certain things, I start getting anxious and it makes me stray from the storyline because I'm inpatient. They way Mahfouz writes it, though, makes me engage in the book completely and allows me to comprehend things a bit more clearly.

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